Thursday 18 November 2010

The Crane Who Found a Baby

This is my first podcast, I hope you enjoy the listening. Thank you for listening


Once upon a time there was a curios boy who found a hole and he was trying to see what was inside. The boy saw a strange pirate and he heard what the pirate said. Then the boy had an idea to scare the pirate. He tried to scare the pirate by drawing. He thought for a long time and finally he knew what he should draw.

He drew a picture of a scary monster in the pirate’s stomach. The boy thought that it was going to be successful. The pirate just wrote all the animals he knew, and told them to find some treasure, but the boy put in the drawing into the hole and hid.

When the pirate saw the paper he ran away and told the animals don't continue to find the treasure, because he was scared of the paper. One the pirate was gone, the boy put his hand in the hole and asked the animals to find food for them to celebrate that the pirate was gone forever. They can share their food and eat together.  So all the animals came out for the hole to look for food.

A bird said, “ Come here snake.”
“ Why should I?” the snake asked.
The bird shouted, “It is important!”
“Ok!” answered the snake.
The bird growled, “Please help us find food and can you ask the giraffe to tell the other animals to find food too!”
“Ok, Mrs. Bird,” the snake agreed.

The big snake told the giraffe that there was going to be a big celebration, and the giraffe was moving fast because the giraffe was hungry. After that the bear told the last animal that was a Crane to find food.

When the Crane was finding food, he found a baby and he thought it was a food. Then the boy said,  "That’s not food, that’s a baby, give it to me!” The Crane was shy and gave the baby to the boy. When the baby was getting bigger the boy was getting old and fat.

The boy is getting old and finally died. The girl is now 6 years old she is trying to manage herself. She plays with the cute animal that is Dog, Crane, and Bear, Monkey and Mouse. The girl is confused why did the bear is drinking coffee.

The girl confused, “ Why did you drinking coffee bear?”
“ Coffee is good, it is tasty!” answered the bear.

She also plays with rabbit because rabbit is also cute and funny.

This is the first time she mat a fat funny cat.

She found a kite at the forest while she is finding a food. She played the kite in the top of the mountain.

HE found a new friend in the forest and became best friend.

They married when they are 15 years old and live happily as a family.

1 comment:

  1. Great job Rendy. You seem to understand how to tell a story when you are speaking the dialouge and changing your voices, but your narrator could use a bit of life.

    The story itself is mysterious and interesting, but a little hard to follow. You worked hard on this and it shows. What could you do differently next time to help give life to the narrator and make the story a bit more clear?

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