About Solar System

I'm curious about Solar System when I was 6 years old until now. I'm curious about Solar System because I don't know really many about it, I was lucky because my lesson now in science is Solar System. I watching video and I ask my parents when I was small. I also go to some museum about Solar System. Now I know many things about Solar System.



When I was 6 years old I ask my parents is Earth a planet? Do we live in Earth? Is the Sun big? How big is the Sun? and many more. My parents also don't really know about Solar System, so my parents buy me a CD about Solar System. Then I learn little bit about Solar System from the CD.

Image by makelessnoise

Reflection

What I learn about the differences between reading and telling the story is Expression, Voice. Example when it is an Animal conversation I change the pitch.

Writing the script is the difficult parts of this unit, because we need to think what is the story looks like.

Recording is the easiest part of this unit, because I only need to talk.

The most important thing that we need to remember when we are telling the story is our loud voice and expression.

I am success in including my loud voice and expression in recording my podcast. I was successful because when it is the narrator voice I speak loudly, I express my voice when it is the animal chatting.

I think that my podcast will be good. I need to spend 6 weeks to finish my podcast and I need to edit every single bit. I think that my podcast shows that I understand the different between telling and reading a story, because I included the things that I need to remember like loud voice and expression.

I enjoy when I was recording my podcast because I learn many things from there. I didn’t enjoy when I was writing the script because it’s need lots of thinking and effort to finish the script.

The Crane Who Found a Baby

This is my first podcast, I hope you enjoy the listening. Thank you for listening

Once upon a time there was a curios boy who found a hole and he was trying to see what was inside. The boy saw a strange pirate and he heard what the pirate said. Then the boy had an idea to scare the pirate. He tried to scare the pirate by drawing. He thought for a long time and finally he knew what he should draw.

He drew a picture of a scary monster in the pirate’s stomach. The boy thought that it was going to be successful. The pirate just wrote all the animals he knew, and told them to find some treasure, but the boy put in the drawing into the hole and hid.

When the pirate saw the paper he ran away and told the animals don't continue to find the treasure, because he was scared of the paper. One the pirate was gone, the boy put his hand in the hole and asked the animals to find food for them to celebrate that the pirate was gone forever. They can share their food and eat together.  So all the animals came out for the hole to look for food.

A bird said, “ Come here snake.”

“ Why should I?” the snake asked.

The bird shouted, “It is important!”

“Ok!” answered the snake.

The bird growled, “Please help us find food and can you ask the giraffe to tell the other animals to find food too!”

“Ok, Mrs. Bird,” the snake agreed.

The big snake told the giraffe that there was going to be a big celebration, and the giraffe was moving fast because the giraffe was hungry. After that the bear told the last animal that was a Crane to find food.

When the Crane was finding food, he found a baby and he thought it was a food. Then the boy said,  "That’s not food, that’s a baby, give it to me!” The Crane was shy and gave the baby to the boy. When the baby was getting bigger the boy was getting old and fat.

The boy is getting old and finally died. The girl is now 6 years old she is trying to manage herself. She plays with the cute animal that is Dog, Crane, and Bear, Monkey and Mouse. The girl is confused why did the bear is drinking coffee.

The girl confused, “ Why did you drinking coffee bear?”

“ Coffee is good, it is tasty!” answered the bear.

She also plays with rabbit because rabbit is also cute and funny.

This is the first time she mat a fat funny cat.

She found a kite at the forest while she is finding a food. She played the kite in the top of the mountain.

HE found a new friend in the forest and became best friend.

They married when they are 15 years old and live happily as a family.

Reflection

A few weeks ago we made a story in Storybird. The steps are: Searched for images from Storybird. I like to search images from Storybird because it is fun, and giving me ideas to make a story easier.

We created 15 slides for our stories. We added text to each slide. Added dialogue and adjectives and edited verbs to past tense. Took screenshots and printed every slide for a large storyboard (cut and paste on a large boxes). I hate to took screenshots and printed every slide for a large storyboard because it's
wasting paper and the printer is too far.

This is my picture of my storyboard

Cut and paste all the text into a Word Document. Added sensory Languange: smell, sound, touch, feeling. Chose one conversation and made it longer. It  was fun and making my story more interesting.

When we are ready with our Storyboard Mr. Jabiz told us to record a Podcast from a story I wrote using pictures from Storybird. 

Introduction

My name Rendy G. I live in Jakarta. My school is at Sinarmas World Academy. My favorite sport is soccer and basketball. My favorite football club is F.C Barcelona.