Solar System

6 weeks ago I'm studying about Curiosity so I write 2 paragraph about Solar System because I'm curious about the solar system but I'm not really sure about the grammar it's looks like this:

I'm curious about Solar System when I was 6 years old until now. I'm curious about Solar System because I don't know really many about it, I was lucky because my lesson now in science is Solar System. I watching video and I ask my parents when I was small. I also go to some museum about Solar System. Now I know many things about Solar System.

When I was 6 years old I ask my parents is Earth a planet? Do we live in Earth? Is the Sun big? How big is the Sun? and many more. My parents also don't really know about Solar System, so my parents buy me a CD about Solar System. Then I learn little bit about Solar System from the CD.


Now I learn about grammar and Mr. Jabiz my ESL teacher is asking us to fix the mistakes that I make in the Curiosity. So this is my movie when I'm fixing the solar system.



Now I'm going to show you my upgraded solar system for curiosity.

I'm curious about gigantic solar system when I was 6 years old until now. I'm curious about solar system because I don't know really many about it. I was lucky because my lesson now in science is solar system. I watching video and I ask my parents when I was small. I also go to some museum about solar system. Now I know many things about solar system.


When I was 6 years old I ask my parents is Earth a planet? Do we live in Earth? Is the Sun big? How big is the Sun? and many more. My parents also don't really know about Solar System, so my parents buy me a CD about solar system. Then I learn little bit about solar system from the CD.